Name: Croberts (Signed) · Date: 02 Dec 2019 10:09 PM · For: Chapter 7

I am so enthralled by this story !!!! I love a good post-Lewis story, especially one that brings back Elliot! So in character and well thought out!!

Author's Response:

Well, thank you. That means a lot. The Lewis arc was begging for a fanfic to follow it so I couldn't disappoint on that end. And what is an SVU fanfic without Elliot.

Name: Heart Story (Signed) · Date: 01 Jun 2019 10:07 PM · For: Chapter 4

Well this just keeps getting creepier and creepier. Who is next? The suspense is making it hard to breathe!

Author's Response:

Hmmm, you may have already figured this one out by now, but if not, I definitely can't spoil this one. Remember to keep breathing. You might need to do so because others are having a harder time with that.

Name: Heart Story (Signed) · Date: 01 Jun 2019 09:47 PM · For: Chapter 3

Oh my gosh! This is so good. The fact that you are bringing back perps from Olivia’s past is so scary. Elliot’s name keeps popping up. Is it just a matter of time before he appears? I know you have it expertly planned out.

Author's Response:

Aww, thanks. I do have a plan indeed, and I believe you are approaching the part you are waiting for.

Name: Heart Story (Signed) · Date: 01 Jun 2019 09:22 PM · For: Chapter 2

Your narrative is remarkable. Telling this story in your own way and yet it feels so familiar, it fits. Always a bit of drama at the end of a chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review. I try to keep a bit of suspense in there.

Name: Poetif (Signed) · Date: 12 Mar 2019 04:50 AM · For: Chapter 5

If Judy is Captain Siper, why are they calling her by her first name?  Also, unless someone is on blackout status, you can tell someone that a person is in a hospital. I like where this is going.  Hopefully nothing terrible happens to Maureen.  Can't wait til Elliot shows up.

Author's Response:

Hello. Thanks for the review and the feedback. Judy is indeed Captain Siper, but they have established in canon referring to her as Judy at times. HIPAA protects the identity of patients in behavioral health settings and in this specific clinic, their policy is that they cannot confirm nor deny. To be continued as to what's in store for Maureen. And let me know what you think when Elliot shows up.

Name: Poetif (Signed) · Date: 12 Mar 2019 02:37 AM · For: Chapter 3

So, there's a lot going on in this.  Olivia's got a bit of self-loathing going on.  She's understandably shaken from this new victim and how someone has copycatted Lewis' M.O.  Then her conversation with Huang, someone who has known her for so long and knows her lies and when she leaves things out.  It left her reeling.  And...whomever this perp is, he is so very angry.  Angry enough to sacrifice other people to teach her a lesson.  Angry enough to mimic the most traumatic cases of her career.  

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! There's definitely a lot going on that's leaving everyone reeling. Until they deal with the feelings coming up, they're never going to be able to move forward with solving the case.