Name: Poetif (Signed) · Date: 10 Jan 2018 05:16 AM · For: Chapter 11

No surprised Elliot snapped like the elastic on a fat man's tightie whities, lol.  Those two fight like juveniles and sulk like teenagers grounded for the weekend.  Cragen should get a medal for putting up with them for over a decade, lol.  I enjoyed the insight into Olivia with the memory of her leaving for college.  It was a good way to explain her hesitation towards needing Elliot.  Those two are some complicated people.  Hopefully, they'll get it together.

Name: Poetif (Signed) · Date: 10 Jan 2018 04:11 AM · For: Chapter 1

Wow.  What a great start.  I remembered this story right when the gang kid got in.  She should've just gone home and got in that tub if I remember correctly, lol.